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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Great chapter :) I thought it was neat how you had Lily in robes and Sev in muggle clothes, with the role reversal. I like how he immedetly noticed her eyes.

God just, Sev having just a wonderful, loving mother figure just makes me so happy. I liked the bit of chemistry (chapter title.. i know :p) between Sev and Lily right away, it was very cute. Brilliant work with this!

I was going to ask in my review last chapter how many people didn't read the summary and corrected your details/characters in reviews, so I laughed a little when I saw you had mentioned it here :p

Great work :)

Author's Response: Yep, I love the way Lily is always associated with her eyes. I'm glad that you found their little first meeting cute and liked the interaction between them, however brief.

I did get an oddball comment or two from people who clearly hadn't read the summary. Evidently people get very defensive about Sirius turning out to be a Death Eater! Haha. I'm glad you approve of my creative license and actually bothered to read the summary :)

Thanks for another kind review!


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