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Review:accioHPFF says:
Hello!

I did struggle slightly with this, although part of it may be because I'm being harsh towards Damien. I thought Pippa was slightly too forgiving and open, by talking to Damien in the manner that she did. Perhaps that's just me...

Albus and Pippa working together seems like an interesting idea, simply because they are so infrequently civil. I can't wait to see how that pans out!
Also, the reintroduction of the note has me guessing, but I really do not know who it could be. :/

Damien and Emilie again. I kind of understand Damien suffering from a lack of attention, but after she was upset because of him, it just seems wrong for him to go and see the other person who upset her. He's a character that I've grown to dislike throughout the story. :S

I love your writing, and I look forward to each new day so that I can read a little more! :)

Author's Response: Heya.

I think at the end, she didn't really decide to forgive, she just decided to forgot. She could either hate Damien for who he is or accept it, so she decided to accept him as she realizes she wants Damien in her life in the future.

Thanks :) It's going to be an interesting partnership! And the notes are important ;D I just love my sub plots.

Yes. Damien is pretty insecure, so he needs attention and lots of it. He's a very complex character and I'm not surprised you feel like this. But it's actually what I wanted, for the readers to feel conflicted as Damien is meant to be a noble Gryffindor but he's not at all. He's human and mainly, we've focused on all his bad sides through Pippa's eyes, but he has his good points as shown in later chapters, as everyone does. He's just not being the best person he can be. It was also traumatic to see his sister go through what she went through so he met Emilie and for a while, she dulled his pain.

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad you're liking the story!


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