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Review:Elenia says:
Hey!

First of all, great chapter! It just flowed forwards perfectly. The pacing was nice and mellow, and the little flashbacks just fitted perfectly. Nice job!

Amazing job on Tonks! I think she's very real to her character, just the way I imagined her to be!

I loved all your ideas. The part where Dumbledore explained that Remus was to 'bite' Tonks, and she would just transform the markings on her skin, was very creative. And I also loved the little comments about the growing dark forces, you know, the removal of the family photos and the safety measures on the notes. Those were really good.

Great job! I'll read the next chapter now (:

~Elenia

Author's Response: Hey! :)

Yey! :P I'm always wary of keeping Tonks canon - my hardest task so far has been Dumbledore! He's so difficult! Haha - normally he just becomes mute ;).

Thank you so much for leaving this review! ♥

Keira :)

P.S. Loved your story! xD


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