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Review:inkbutterfly says:
Short and sweet is fine :)
Oh, and is that how the legendary couple James and Lily get paired up, by getting tips from her best friend. Nice! Also, I really like Jane. The way she and Lily act is very best friend-ish and Sirius, James and Lupin make me smile as well. Not much Peter though, but its fine because I really hate him.
One way you could improve is if you make less blocky paragraphs so it floes more :)

Xx

Author's Response: I think Jane's involvement will be a significant factor in the James/ Lily story. Though, at the end of the day it's up to the two lovebirds to make it work.

I'm so glad you like Jane. That's the most important thing for me. We can't have our heroine being unlikable, can we? Jane and Lily have a very good friendship, I must agree. I wish I had a friendship like theirs. And the Marauders have the most amazing friendship. I mean, they'd die rather then betray each other. Except for that scoundrel Pettigrew, who WILL make an appearance within the next few chapters.

Thanks for the tip. I certainly need to work on making the story flow. Thank -you so much for the reviews. Reviews are my anti-drug.

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