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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for Slytherin Tag!

Wow, your writing never ceases to amaze me. I must say you have captured Bellatrix brilliantly, shown her in a different light, yet something that is very much plausible. I absolutely love your writing style, the narrative flows so flawlessly.

Voldemort's characterization seemed slightly strange to me at certain points though, as I just can't imagine him behaving the way he was with Bellatrix, but otherwise for the most part I think you painted him satisfactorily enough as well.

I didn't see any "technical" issues with the story either. Again, I loved the story and your portrayal of Bellatrix. It was a very neat one-shot. The descriptions were brilliantly written too.

Over all, good job!

9/10

Cheers!
AD

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for coming by!

It's great to hear that you liked Bellatrix, even though she was painted in a slightly different way here, as a more vulnerable woman.

Voldemort probably seems strange to you because he, like Bellatrix, was affected by the film noir aspects of this story. Bellatrix represents the anti-hero, the flawed individual with a mix of good and bad intentions, and Voldemort represents a male version of the femme fatale, which is why he's trying to persuade her with the dancing and romancing. I know it's not a totally canon portrayal, but I hope you can appreciate it in an artistic way.

Thanks so much for your kind review!

Amada


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