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Review:Icouldn'tcomeupwithanawesomename says:
Yeah me again. *STALKER ALERT* I took your advice and am currently reviewing another story, as you see.

Now about this story. I SHOULD HAVE READ THIS A LONG TIME AGO!! I normally don't read one-shots (something to do with frustrations like 'why does it stop here? I WANT MORE') but I read the discription (a shadowed speck, consumingly sweet) and it was all so mysterious that I gave in.

I loved the way it flowed. Does that make sense? Like, the essence of poetry, the rhythm, the beautiful use of language. And I'm a sucker for fairytales *disney collection here*, though I didn't see the movie Red Riding Hood.

But... what happens to Victoire? Did she die? (Don't laugh if she didn't. I have to read this kind of stories twenty times before getting the double meaning. I read all the other reviews here for the same reason.)

And does Dom become a werewolf or does she die too or none of mentioned? And she cleanses him. Does that mean she changes him to his human form again? But he bites her after that, right? What does cleansing even MEAN? *Google Transelate* Er, I'm confused.

But, as incoherent as this review is, I loved the story all the same. It has a certain magic to it, and as with my Albus obsession, I love mystery. Maybe I shouldn't have asked any questions at all, because then some of the mystery might dissapear. Hmpf. I'll just have to read Little Red for a sixth time then, don't I? :D

PS Second stalker alert: I'm reading Game too. And I read Capers, but I didn't feel very reviewative then. :S

PPS I'll live until March.

Author's Response: Oh hullo again xD

Hee most of my oneshots tend to be deviations from my normal writing. It's loads of fun. This was definitely the most deviously devious of my deviations.

I looove fairy tales and folk tales. Hehe, I think that's been somewhat apparent, especially now with my plunny for etc. But I generally do not like movie adaptations, so I haven't seen that either.

Bahaha, I think there's plenty of ways to interpret it. When I wrote it, I thought of it as Teddy, driven by his obsession with Dom, kills Victoire to be with Dom. Dom tries to help Teddy, reverse the damage she feel she's responsible for (since she was encouraging his obsession), but it doesn't work.

Oh dear! Game is so old though D: SO OLDDD. I only ever pay attention to etc and Capers lolol. Capers is coming soon, but i haven't got much time to finish the chapter up properly. I promised that would be posted a few days ago lolol. And only after that can I finish etc.


but even if you are, thank you~

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