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Review:Any says:
So my second review on chapter five. loved the last one, though it was hard to put the normal anya and the dancing anya in one person. I think she recognised him, didnt she? and even though she managed such harsh words at him! - I'm really trying to figure out all those girl scences, I hope they will make sense in the end, cause they're exhausting in reality and exhausting in fiction ;) always this blaaabla

looking forward for more marauder action!

Author's Response: The fourth chapter was tricky to write as well, so you can imagine my relief and giddiness to hear you say that you liked it :)
Yeah, she did regognised him in the pub, that's why she freaked out on him like that. I do hope that the 'girl scenes' (lol!! love that description) make sense to you-- i can see from your other review that they did in the end -- because they describe sucha big part of anya's character and its going to come up later. i tried to describe this part of her through interaction, to make the story a bit more dinamic, since it needs more dialogue whenever it can get it. But I agre with you on the whole blaablabla when girls are talking to each other with all the subtexts and jabs. Its tiring to write sometimes.

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