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Review:EverDiggory says:
How sad): the was you wrote this was beautifully hypnotic. It was haunting,it was everything that it needed to be and so much more. I loved how you would tell the story and add in memories,as well as present life. I've never seen a story quite like so.

Your description was just truly beyond words. I don't have any adjectives that seem fitting enough to label your descriptions as. Let's just put it as they were out of this world. Your descriptions really made my stomach clench,made my chest ache,and put a lump in my throat. Good job! Excellent,actually!

One thing that really loomed in my mind was Arthur's absence. The whole time I was wondering if he had passed before Molly,or if he was just MIA at the moment. I didn't really want to go to deep into why he wasn't in this,seeing as how I was already on the verge of tears.

You describe death painfully,which is great. Someone who has never lost anyone close could read this and still capture the intense emotion of the passing of a loved one. That is the most a writer can hope for when writing such an emotional piece.

Altogether,your descriptions were fantastic yet haunting(which I assume was the desired effect) and they way you told the story was unique and hypnotic. This story was so emotionally captivating, and truly did bring years to my eyes. And I'm not one of those people who cry at the drop of a hat,it takes a lot to get the waterworks outta me. You have done a wonderful job,there was no way anyone could have asked more of you.

10/10 (if I could give a 100/10,I would!)

xoxo

Ever

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