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Review:adluvshp says:
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OMG this is some amazing work!! I totally love this story!! Bellatrix has always intrigued me, and I don't think anyone in fanfiction has ever done justice to her (at least from what I've read so far) but you, you have done it! You have portrayed her the way she is, and I salute you for that. Your writing was impeccable, the flow perfect, the plot brilliant and the characterization super smashing. I have come across something so awesome after ages. I am so glad I chose to read this story. This was really some great writing. I think you really did very well with it. I couldn't spot any grammar/spelling errors, no faults in plot, flow and characterization, and an emotion-evoking narrative over all. It was all really brilliant. I loved the idea of Bellatrix being Draco's mother, and conceiving him with Lucius, yet her yearning for Voldemort. You painted it all so well. I could feel everything.

Hats off to you for such a brilliant piece of writing!!

Keep writing more awesome stuff like this one!!

11/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: THANK YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL REVIEW! I saw you also recommended it! :) Yay!

I truly did try to stay to Bella's character. Writing psycho happens to come easy to me - a fact that I try not to look at too closely - and so I kind of had an easy time of writing her. However, it was going to be a bit OOC due to the premise but I'm glad I didn't stray too far.

Thank you so much for this!

xChar


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