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Review:The Last Marauder says:
Yay! I was so glad when I saw that you had updated it. The chapter reads so well, I mean your mastery of how to tell a story and make it flow effortlessly is brilliant!

I really like the relationship between Tonks and Moody - Tonks had me laughing on both occasions when she threw in those funny retorts about Moody. I like how he obviously cares about her, but at the same time still treats her with that stiffness we associate with Moody. What I mean is that he doesn't seem out of character at all!

I loved the paragraph of Tonks's thoughts at the beginning, that made me laugh too. It was a really good piece. Overall, I love how you are getting inside Tonks's head, it's so realistic and convincing - I dunno why but I always find her hard to write myself, but you've done such a brilliant job *stares jealously* ;-)

Oh yeah, I also like how you are creating this sort air of mystery about Lupin - Tonks doesn't know why he is fighting and she doesn't understand him - that's why she cannot copy his eyes. It's really cool!

Anyway, I am really liking this story. Please keep going with it. I can't wait for the next chapter, but right now, this is going into my favourite's list ;) 10/10

Author's Response: Hello! :D

...Thank you so much! Really made my day! xD

You've described their relationship perfectly - it's just how I've always seen it. He cares about her in a fatherly manner but at the time is the paranoid, grumpy Moody we all love xD

I'm sure you write Tonks brilliantly! I think everyone feels doubt over their work until reviews like this one make you think.. 'oh.. they like it!'

I'll come and read your stories when the school load calms down a bit! :)

Thanks so much for the wonderful review (and the one on MM)!!

Keira :D

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