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Review:PenguinsWillReignSupreme says:
I love this/you/life/everyone but Phil ♥

You are my angst queen. I knew what was coming but it still took me by surprise because for a second I thought he might be okay and you may have changed your mind and life might be good.

Then it wasn't :(

I don't know when you decided to structure it like this but I thought it was beautiful and I just adore it.

You're so clever and lovely and wonderful.


Author's Response: I love you! Angst queen sounds a bit... iffy. I'll accept Angst Empress, in future.

I was writing the main flashback-y bit and originally I was going to have the first dive as his death, but then I felt it didn't quite have the same impact that I was hoping. So he gets a tiny second chance and then it's all over. Cruel. :P

THIS was what I was trying to explain to you but failing. The interweaving flashback thing. Well, you can see it now, at least :D


your favourite woodlouse ♥

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