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Review:Aderyn says:
I really enjoyed this story. For one thing, I'm fond of this particular era, but also this wad well written! I really found Dorcas to fit the description of pride- not just in terms of the watch but also her superiority.

Tom, I thought was maybe too kind. Wasn't he supposed to be haughty? But still his interactions with Minerva were sweet.

I liked how subtle his revenge was at the end. I was afraid he would harm Dorcas, but stealing the watch seems almost crueller.

Good job, overall. I think Dorcas is a realistic head girl for the time and has flaws that make her more human. This wad fun to read!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Maybe I did let Tom be a little too nice in this story, but I was trying to depict how he had the entire school wrapped around his little finger despite his shady dealings.

I had a lot of fun creating Dorcas's character; as a canon character without much more than a name and an Order affiliation, I've had a lot of leeway.

(Who knows what would've happened if Minerva had not come in right when she did? . I suppose this could not have been called a prequel to Unwritten!) Thanks again!

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