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Review:marinahill says:
I've been meaning to read this for absolutely ages, so I'm glad I'm getting the chance to now :)

You're right - this was vague, but I definitely don't think that's a bad thing. It leaves a lot of room for interpretation, which is a lot of the fun in one-shots.

There are some really lovely one-liners in here, like the last line and many others. In fact, I think most of this is made up of pretty sentences and any of them could be taken out of context and be admired.

Interpretation-wise, I'm pretty rubbish at it, but I'll have a go anyway because that's part of the fun of reading. I love the parallels you drew to Little Red Riding Hood. I'm a real sucker for twisted fairytales and you definitely didn't disappoint. Did you choose LRRH because of potential links between Teddy and the wolf? I don't usually like to see him portrayed as a werewolf, but it works here because it fits so well with the fairytale.

At the start, Dominique seems like the bad one, tempting him away from Victoire but then that's turned on its head further towards the end when he turns into the wolf. So in the end, I'm not sure who I'm supposed to dislike more haha. And I've just realised I've gone a bit rambly now and I haven't got a point so I'll stop and just say I enjoyed this and it's nice to see you write something different :P


Author's Response: Oh hey Marina! :D

I'm so glad you liked it. It was just something wayyy different for me, and I think it helped me get comfortable with different styles.

Oh dear, I would not have your bravery to interpret xD I am just as rubbish. I think that's a valid interpretation. In my view of the ending, I like to think that it's Dom sort of "growing out" of her Little Red phase, but Teddy remains unchanged, stuck in his obsession.

♥ thank you for the review! ^__^

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