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Review:RavenclawWayToBe says:
This was beautifully written. I think you left a bit of a mystery as to what was going on with Teddy, and i think you did the story line justice. I adored how you seperated the memories by flashbacks and all i can say is that maybe you should have made them sentences and not split the sentences half way through. Other than that i have no critiques. I think you captured the emotion of pain and resentment and guilt within Teddy incredibly well. I loved that your story was full of description and emotion. This was beautifully done. Keep writing! You are a talented author
-RavenclawWayToBe

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for such a lovely review! I split the main flashback into sections with incomplete sentences so that it became clear that each bit was linked, rather than just a random flashback. I sort of wanted it to read a bit unnaturally, so that it was like a thought in Teddy's head, interrupted by his life.

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Marina


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