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Review:Alopex says:
I am here because of the podcast. :) I opened up the chapter so I could read along (I pretty much have to do that or my attention wanders). This was a short chapter (prologue), so there isn't a huge amount to comment on. However, I feel like it was an intriguing beginning to the story! I was assuming here that you were talking about Ginny, but there seem to be some AU details . . . either that, or I'm wrong.

This chapter definitely has a somewhat ominous vibe to it, like something poised about to happen. The narrator, MileyMalfoy, did really well too, adding very much to the atmosphere of the story. I don't think I would have enjoyed it as much just reading it on my own, since I wouldn't have gotten the same dramatic effect.

Nice start!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great feedback! I completely forgot that it was being read as a podcast lol I'll have to go listen to it.

and no you weren't wrong :) I was going of ominous and unsettling. I just hope I pulled it off for everyone.

Thanks again, Alo!

~SLy~


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