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Review:charlottetrips says:
So I decided to come back to get Tracey’s back story. Haven’t we all been there? With being unnoticed. It’s something that I’ve definitely come across at times in my school years (and even a little beyond sometimes).

Whoa! Seriously being called out in front of a class for plagiarizing! That’s super embarrassing and I cannot actually believe McGonagall would do that in front of a class. She seems more the type to just tell Tracey to stay behind in a sort of blatant “You’re-in-trouble-fashion” but not actually saying the crime in front of everyone.

I was wondering how Tracey didn’t know who’s paper it was if someone had just switched the names and then you explained it right after. It might’ve been best to say it right off due to the confusion a reader could experience (unless you meant it to be all mysterious like that!).

I hate the name Millicent.

Whoa! Tracey slapped and cursed at her! Whoa! Look at that, not so quiet after all! Though I would’ve thought Millicent would have reacted right back.

Is this meant to go along with the “Yule Ball” story because I didn’t get that they were an item prior to that. Or do you just like using Tracey and Theo? :)

Author's Response: Yeah this was one of my first oneshots and I've got McGonagall a little ooc which I'm not a big fan of either. I wanted Tracey to be really mad about the whole order and over react a bit but I had millicent hold back because she was already in big trouble and woudn't want to get in more trouble. It's not meant to go with Yule Ball as I just love this pairing. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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