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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Ah, vampires! As you probably figured out from my status update on the forums, I love, love, love vampires, they're my favorite... Obsession. LOL. (I said I'd review this tonight. ^.^)

Anyway... I can't truly comment on characterization, considering they're OCs and, therefore, your own, but I do like your characters so far. I can very easily imagine that being the way humans would live if vampires took over. It would be terrifying.

I didn't see any grammar issues and it's flowing nicely.

A great start. Going to chapter two.

Sam.

Author's Response: Hey there! :) They're not *quite* an obsession yet for me, but they're so intriguing and, I think, as they're losing their grip in YA lit after the 'phase' has somewhat moved on, I actually find them interesting again! :P

Yes, this is going to be an entirely OC based story, so it will be tough to make sure they're in character. I suppose what I meant by that is if my OC's are believable and consistant, if they need improvements, or if they're cliched, etc. :)

Thanks again for the review! :)

~VioletBlade


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