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Review:LovingMarauder says:
This chapter was ok,but I didn't like it like the previous.The whole that itchy-bitchy thing with hexing poor Charlie was brutal,but Naomi Ivy and Lulu H are just cold as Antarctica,and it will stay so,so long until Naomi understands,that she's in love with Sirius.
And shag with James?!When I saw her dream,I thoudh 'Oh dear God,now is over,Sirius will be deep hurt,she'll lost her only friend and second person about who she cares',and than,I mention that you wrote that part other than rest of story.
I'm sorry for my bad English,it isn't my nativ language.
Update soon.=)
x

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Well, Naomi and Lulu are really cold and don't usually think about anyone else. Naomi is mean and we know that; the fact that she can be nice too will not suddenly just change who she is.
The dream is the first manifestation of the goodness in her; she was afraid and felt bad when she thought she'd lost Sirius but I couldn't just happen because she isn't aware that she likes him yet. Dreams come from the subconscious part of the mind and so Naomi has no control of them; thus anything can happen, even her breaking down.
With regards to James... well, she's mean, selfish and beautiful and James is popular, charming and very attractive. It is just natural that they feel this attraction for each other. Had Naomi been a nice girl she wouldn't have touched him but like I said, she is not.
Lots of love,
Kate


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