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Review:Moonyxluna says:
aw, Albus is such a sweetheart teaching her! I can see why she likes him :) Really great chapter again, I really love the way this story is progressing.

It's so intersting to see how the little things that witches and wizards do don't go unnoticed by the muggles around them. I wonder when she's going to find out! I loved all of your details in the beginning about finding shoes, and not being aloud in the Potter's house.

I did see one thing (I do the same exact thing, so that's how I noticed d:) but you have 'incert line' where I'm assuming you wanted to add a line break? Just letting you know :) it's about 2/3 way down.

I forgot to mention this in my review of the last chapter, but I thought it was really sweet how Al knew she'd like him for being him, and not for the Potter last name. Great work, this is a really great story!

Author's Response: :D again, I'm so happy you like the story! Thank you so much. Oops, I should probably go take that out and put in the line, huh :P Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
~Lily


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