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Review:Moonyxluna says:
great chapter :) He did get to save her! and teach her how to swim. I loved how she instantly panicked that Ginny was lecturing Albus on 'being apropriate' in front of little kids. I'm guessing Harry got called into an Auror mission? Poor Albus, getting all flustered when Amelia's dad is a cop :)

I loved the overheard conversation between James and Albus, I just had to say 'awwwh' when he was telling James how 'pretty and cool' she had to be :)

I wonder when she's going to find out... and what she will think! Fantastic chapter, this is a really neat idea, and it's very well written, brilliant job!

Author's Response: Yeah, Harry was called out to an Auror mission :P Glad you liked the part about her dad being a cop! Actually, I'm just glad you like the story! Thank you so much for the review :)
~Lily


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