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Review:alicia and anne says:
I love how you wrote Ron and Hermione, I think you wrote them brilliantly. I don't know whether I should like James or not? haha You've written him really well and shown that he doesn't really care about anyone elses feelings unless he gets something from them in return. He seems like such an enigma at the moment, and a bit like a child at times, and it's making him such a stand out character, the best I've seen him written. It's great to see that people aren't falling at his feet. I loved the exchange between Hermione and James at the beginning, she seems so Hermione it's great.
This story is just amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I get so flappy when I have to write canon characters. I hate it so much. JKR was just too good!

That's exactly what I want. I'm not sure you should like him at this point either. I kind of worry for anyone that does. He's very immature, childish, clinging on to his past (hence the title). I didn't want him to be a hero. I want him to be a very sad, very flawed man who needs to grow up.

Thank you so, so much. Your reviews have been so lovely!


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