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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Here from the forums with your review!

First of all, this is such a good idea for the story. I really enjoy stories about the first war since it was such a secretive and dangerous time that we don't know a whole lot about from the books.

I also really enjoy stories about underloved characters, and its great to see one about one of the order members we know so little about. I really enjoyed your characterization of Caradoc. He kind of reminded me of Han Solo in a way, with his attitude and shady business dealings. It was also interesting that he was a sytherin, which really fits in with Dumbledore's message about how the houses have to stay together. The Maruaders and Lily were well portrayed as well.

The desriptions were really well done and painted a great picture of mystery and danger hanging over the story. The plot seems to be well set up, and I'm anxious to find out more about Caradoc's mission.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the idea! The first war has always intrigued me and I always wanted to write about it, so this is kinda a difficult fic for me coz I want to get it right, you know?
I adore underloved characters! They're just so utterly fascinating... :D Haha, Han Solo? Really? lol. I totally didn't have him in mind... there are a few similarities, though. No Chewbacca, though ;) Honestly, I always decide personality first and house second with characters, and there was no way he could be anything but a Slytherin. Marauders were fun! Ah, how I do love James and Sirius...
Gah, thanks so much! :D I'm never sure how much mystery/danger is enough... it's kinda hard to gauge... Also, I really love your stuff (Behind the Curtain and Their Finest Hour) which is sort of similar, so I'm so glad you like this!

Thanks for the awesome review!
Aph xx


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