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Review:AC_rules says:
AHh. There's too many great things about this fic. I love it when people take something like the Order and put there won fabulous flair on it. There's so much potential and when people come up with such orginal idea I just lovee it.

Mundungus? Aahhh, this is exciting. I have a feeling you have something great planned for this and I can't wait to read more. Although, it frustrates me that the Order members are walking straight into battle - using each others names out loud and not disgusing themselves. But they'll kill you! They'll kill you all!

Also, just one thing. With the whole 'does that count as a win' it spiralled off my thinking and I really think you should throw in a line a bit like "we don't count who wins or loses, because we're never going to win" or something like that. Worded better, but sometihng like tha would be slap-round-the-face-powerful

Anyway, loved it :)

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I really enjoy writing it - it's just hard to find the muse for it coz we already know quite a bit about it. It's fun, though.
Yes, Mundungus! He will show up again, I promise ;) His character is so much fun to write. It's frustrating, but they never used code-names or anything - I suppose the Marauders have their nicknames - so it's frustrating but that's just how it is ;)
Hm... yeah, true. That would shut Sirius up :P I'll definitely think about that when I go through this (before I add the next chapter probably, lol) so thanks for that!

Thanks for the review!
Aph xx

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