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Review:Illuminate says:
:D Hi! I've not read 'Mischief Managed' so I couldn't review the fifth chapter xD

I really like this opening chapter! I think you've got the characterisations of everyone down wonderfully, especially Moody and Dumbledore (both of whom are extremely difficult characters to write, so well done). Your narration as Tonks is believable, she definetely seems younger and more kooky than the rest of them. I also like how you subtley foreshadowed the romance between Remus and Tonks.

Great job! :)

Author's Response: Oh! Don't worry about that xD

Yay - Moody and Dumbledore are ridiculously hard to write! I think Dumbledore goes slightly OOC in the next chapter so I'm editing it now :)

Thanks for the review! :)

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