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Review:apocalypse says:
Hey! This is apocalypse, here with your review!

Alas! The Battle! I think that this chapter is one of the finest chapters I have ever read! It reveals such complexity, such well planned details, excellent execution and just true brilliance!

The arrival of the wizards in the start was a very great idea. You wrote it all very well. The feelings Dumbledore and the others had before the new people coming in were well described and then the relief they felt after having some more support was written marvelously! =)

The Muggle fighting was, as usual, great. I had fun reading it and think that Minerva's timing was perfect. =P I'm glad she said the words Evans was trying to see, it had a funny touch to a serious scene. =P

Ever since I realised that you're gonna add this battle into your story, I've been wondering how Dumbledore would get the Elder Wand from Grindlewald without really beating him in a duel. I can see that you've thought about it a lot too and you pulled it off very well! A hand to hand compact was an excellent idea; I think that you personalised it and added your own twist to it to justify the entire situation which made the whole scene all the more thrilling to read! And the sword appearing for Dumbledore! Mm, a classic concept! Brilliant job! =)

I'm glad to see that Aberforth is now on considerably better terms with his brother. Also, the best part was that they did not truly become brothers again. As that would've clashed with the canon story.

Anyhow! Awesome chapter! It was totally better than what I had expected and I enjoyed reading it thoroughly! I can't believe that this story is coming to an end; I've reviewed every chapter of it and it feels so weird to be so close to the final goodbye. Hope you like this review! I'm looking forward to reading the epilogue! =) Happy Writing! =D

Author's Response: Hey again!

So obviously the whole story was building up to this chapter, and I really struggles with tyring to think up how Dumbledore would win when obviously Grindelwald had the elder wand.

I knew this chapter had to be epic, and I was constantly re-writing it, worried that it wasn't quite epic enough. I'm still not sure if it is or not, but it's really reassuring to see it be received like this.

Thanks a lot for all the reviews, its much appreciated, and I hope you enjoy the ending!


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