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Review:academica says:
Hey! Review tag brought me back for chapter two!

Haha, I love the Ron/Hermione conversation, especially the way she ended it with that line from canon. Poor Ron must be awfully confused. Also, McGonagall/Flitwick? Hagrid/Trelawney? Ron, must your mind wander to such dark places?

"Honeymoon suite". haha. And you... I mean, Hermione makes an excellent point about time turners. They were really never used for their most obvious practical purposes. I'm so glad you threw that little jab in there about cross-generational pairings and poor Peter, always the bridesmaid.

Oh, the angst! If Draco can't depend on his orbs (and his Quidditch-toned abs, of course), I'm not sure how he'll get out of this one. However, in true Dramione fashion, I'm sure Hermione will forgive him of all of his faults and confess that she always knew that he was a hero in disguise... just as soon as she finishes with her football business.

...seriously, do they ever go to class? Haha.

Great chapter! I'll be back for the third sometime soon :)

Amanda

Author's Response: Welcome back!

So I have to say one of the main things I don't like about these types of stories is their treatment of Ron and how they make him so uncaring and even abusive (as opposed to the kind hearted and heroic Draco of course) so I wanted to have some fun with that. I was simply trying to think of ships who's names would be impossible to make a nickname out of, but come to think of it, those pairings are kind of disturbing.

I think the existence and uses of time turners are one of the major plot holes in the series, and of course, we all know what they're used for in fanfics! And Peter is usually lucky if he makes it into the story at all of course.

This is all setting up for an epic conclusion!

Thanks again for the review!

James

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