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Review:AC_rules says:
AHh!!

This was the best chapter you've written to date. Honestly, this was just wonderful in so many ways and I really really really did love it. Sorry for being a rubbish person and not keeping up with updates, it really does make me rubbish. But, alas, I'm here now and I'm going to leave you a nice lovely long review to make up for it.

I love reading an authors work when you can feel them improving as they write. It's so exciting, especially when what they were writing in the first place was really good anyway but, well, this chapter was pretty exceptional.

You've got Tom so perfectly here, slowly becoming more and more, well, Voldemort-ish rather than just another slighty mildly obsessive teenager. Here, I could real feel him beginning to transform and sort of /thirst/ for blood and stuff. Which was why it was even more fab when you tied in the stuff about the name. I wanted to cheer when I read that bit of the chapter, because it tied in so well! You're makiing me both want to write the next chapter of my story written in this era, but also hide from it - cause this was just too good.

Then Amaya! Ah, the poor dear. Send her a hug from me, will you?

Anyway, this was a loverrrly chapter. Now you've got to update soon so I can read some more. Yeah? Yeah. Awesome.

:)

-AC

Author's Response: Well hello there! I saw that the review count on this story had gone up, and on my way to check it, I was thinking "I hope this is from Helen" and lookie there! IT IS! :D

Nahhh, it's completely fine. You are not a rubbish person at all. And this was a lovely long review! I'm all warm and fuzzy from all your lovely compliments. I really hope I'm improving as I write! I was just thinking that I need to go back and rewrite these first chapters because they're really quite awful. I can't believe it's been nearly a year since I started this story.

Seee, this is why I was having Tom issues! It's really hard to write a psychopath :P I'm so so glad that it came across well though. And the name, gah, I felt like that was so random at the end but it keeps cropping up so I didn't want to let go of it completely (especially as the next chapter is almost all Amaya), but that was a huge reasssurance. NO NO NO GO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER OF INFRINGEMENT. It's too good to hide from!

As for Amaya, *cough*dontfeelsorryforheryet*cough*

Thank you for the lovely review! Update will hopefully be soon!

-Naida


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