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Review:charlottetrips says:
I'm now here for Chapter 2. Thank you for skipping some very sad years, though I'm sure you'll touch on it in the coming chapters.

I like the way you describe the little actions like fiddling with the ring around her neck (though I know it's significant) and the fact that Tonks blinks or this on Hermione - pushing her dark, though [] slightly tamer - though I feel you should put [only] there as it would seem to read more as a complete thought.

The way the girls react to this guy is so girly :P It's awesome. Tall, Dark and Delicious
Also their way of talking and the joking and comments they make as well as the understanding they have of Tonks and her loss of Remus speaks of long-standing friendship. You write that well here.

So [your] married?" - you're

I like Dylan. He's gorgeous and sensitive! What a winning combo! :P

Your story is coming along very nicely!

Author's Response: I'll fix those, thanks for pointing them out to me. And thank you for reviewing this.

Everyone will love Dylan! At least, I hope so. :D

Sam.


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