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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I really loved the a walk to remember quote, (although I've never seen the movie) I think it was a neat idea for the chapter summary, as well as placed through the story.

I did notice two things in the beginning, you have 'some one', and someone is one word. The same with girlfriend, I know that sometimes all it needs is a readover to catch those things that spellcheck wouldn't get. I'm a huge victim of that, so just letting you know (:

I really liked all of the emotion in this, it was a very powerful read. I think Sirius is a difficult character to write in first person, but you did good here. I think you got James, Remus, and Peter's characteristics very good too, even though they were briefly shown. Great one-shot! I enjoyed reading it a lot, and thanks for the swap!

Author's Response: Thank you! :_
Righty-o. Oops, as soon as my other chapter is validated I'll fix that, thank you.

Aw, thanks, that really means a lot to me.


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