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Review:WildFlower says:
I really loved this chapter! Switching to James P.O.V was really well done, you handled it very well it flowed awesomely. I'm kind of happy you made it in his P.O.V than Sirius' - which with other fanfic's it would have surely gone. This chapter also made me laugh in various places, Sirius and Naomi were just hilarious here - the humour is starting to rise and I can see Sirius and Naomi push each others buttons in a good way, Sirius makes us see a little of Naomi's vulnerability - two strong personalities are bound to cause cracks. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. I would love to see more of Narcissa's bitchyness - especially since her position as Queen Bee in jeopardy.

Off to the next chapter with much eagerness!

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Hi again!
Thanks once more!!
Well, Narcissa is important but in this first half of the fic we won't see her much... I have a special surprise prepared... but I can't tell you anything else :)
Lots of love,

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