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Review:Moonyxluna says:
loved this :) the way Rolf and Luna overloaded Teddy with information about their sons was very adorable, and I really liked what you did with their characters. I loved the fear that glinted in Rolf's eyes when he realized Teddy would be watching the kids alone.

Teddy seems like he thinks he's got it all figured out (: The ice cream offer right away... attempting to get them on his side. I thought it was really sweet how Teddy let Lysander sleep with him after the bad dream, although, (not that I know all that much about kids, just what I've heard) I've heard that that leads to kids wanting to do that every night, so it'll be intersting to see if that comes back to bite him (:

I can't wait to see what happens when they go to the joke shop... being this is for the 'little brats' challenge, I can only assume it won't end too well for Teddy :D Great job, I think you did very well with the characters, dialogue, and characterizations of the small children. Looking forward to more, I really love your writing!

Author's Response: I'm most grateful for what you said about liking Rolf and Luna's characters because I've never written them before. Thank you for that. :)

Yeah, kids are definitely like that (I know because of my brother), but you'll have to wait and see about that. :P

Oh, Teddy, what has he gotten himself into. LOL.

Thanks for reviewing.

Sam.

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