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Review:Miss Muggle says:
I like the idea of the story. But is it really necessary to have each character repeat the same thing? I don't mean the first line they each had, but the entire monologues. None of them said anything new. WHAT they were saying set it up as a good story, but having to read it three times is boring. I'll be honest, I skimmed the last one.
As for what they were each saying, I enjoyed it. There was not too much of telling, not showing, but overall it was good. I think each girl has a nice distinctive personality and their own unique view. I'm impressed with the way you're writing from three characters' POVs.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your constructive critisism. But to answer your question, I wrote with them saying practically the same thing, so you could see the differences in how they handle the same situations. I appreciate your honesty. Thanks. I hope you continue reading. Thank you so much for your review. :)

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