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Review:RavenclawWayToBe says:
This was very well written. Probably my only critique would be to make the seperations between the moments a bit more distinguished. I got it but for the first while i was confused when you changed days and things like that. This was written very well, i think you had the perfect amount of description and narration in there. You had a wonderful plotline and your story flowed well. I liked that you put the little poem/paragraph thing at the end of your story, it was definitely a great way to sum up the story. I loved that you used the aspect of the wish on the star that kept them together and that though she regrets it, she is strangely okay with it at the end (or at least that's what i thought) . This was very well written! Keep writing :)
-RavenclawWayToBe

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I'm editing it now because everyone seems to say that.
It was originally suppose to be a short story but the chapters were only like 400 words each so they wouldn't have passed as a chapter which is why the gaps are so jolty and hard to find.
Hopefully when I edit it it'll look better and be easier to read.
Thank you again!!
Jaz


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