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Review:Elenia says:
Heey!

Oh wow, I'm really glad I picked this story, because I really liked this! I've never before read a Theo/OC story before, so that was a nice change already. And I also love the ones that are about the adult-life of the characters, since it feels like so many concentrate on happenings in Hogwarts.

This was really well written. I loved all the little details you planted everywhere and the description. They just really made this story flow and held the interest up through the whole chapter.

I really liked Tracey, she was a great character. Loved the interaction between her and her daughter. It was very well written and made me smile to see all those special little things they have going on between them. and I really like how you handled and described the difficulties of being a single mum; it was very believable and realistic. So great work!

Didn't learn much about Nott yet, but I think I'll take a peak on your next chapter to see what he's like (:

Excellent work!

Author's Response: Technically its not a Theo/OC as Tracey Davis is listed on J K rowlings list of Harry's classmates even though she is never mentioned in the actual series. I'm really glad that you liked this story and thought it was well written. I'm so glad you like Tracey and her daughter! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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