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Review:apocalypse says:
Hey! This is apocalypse, finally here with your review! I'm so sorry for taking so long, I've been really sick.

You've done a brilliant job in this chapter! I think that you took Dumbledore's character up another notch and it was good to see how you describe his feelings so well while keeping him canon. The way you use his feelings for his family and describe his nervousness for the upcoming battle, that's pretty remarkable! I especially liked the starting and was happy to see that you included another canon character in the story. Bringing in Bathilda to actually help Dumbledore defeat her nephew was a very nice twist to the entire scenario. Excellent job!

You've put across your idea of Grindelwald very well. You did a good job in writing that scene between Grindelwald and Hitler. I think that he did right, in his own way, and left the Muggles he had no use of anymore. It gives a complete look of the Grindelwald you've been creating and finalizes his character.

Slughorn and Hagrid were so on character, I enjoyed reading them. The dialogue and the description was perfect in that scene. It's becoming pretty apparent how you're tying up all loose ends and are heading towards the end of the story. I think that you've done an excellent job in executing your story and are doing a brilliant job in wrapping it up.

Hmm, Aberforth was a very pleasant surprise. You're doing such an effortless job of fitting in the canon characters, it amazes me!

I'm loving this story and it's making sad to know that it's coming to an end! Anyway, I loved reading this chapter! Keep it up! =D

Author's Response: Hey again, hope you're feeling better!

These last couple chapters were probably the hardest to write, trying to tie up the plot while telling Dumbledore's story, so its really reassuring to hear that turned out well.

I imagined that Grindelwald and Hitler were allies of convenience all along, so now that the nazis are losing, he would have no more use for them. Grindelwald is pretty much a master manipulator.

Glad you liked Slughorn and Hagrid, I'm trying to work in as many canon characters as I can without blatantly forcing it.

Thanks a lot for the review, and I hope you enjoy the conclusion!


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