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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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It looks like you're off to a good start here. I enjoyed the descriptions at the beginning, we could really get a good feel of the tension that existed between Scorpius and Draco, and the setting of the manor provided a strong backdrop that really added to the story.

In the future chapters, I would like to see some more background information about Draco and Scorpius's relationship and what caused the tensions that brought them to this point. I imagine it would have to be something pretty significant.

The closing scene provided a nice transition and gave us a god glimpse of Scorpius' and Albus' friendship. Lot's of potential so far!

Author's Response: Hi :)

Thank you! I'm glad that you think it started well, otherwise I'd have to edit it and worry about what I'd written before I carry on. :P

There will be more background coming in, part of C2 describing that has been written.

Thank you again! :D

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