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Review:Elenia says:
Elenia here again (:

Oh, the more I read this story, the more I love it. It's written so beautifully and it's just so heart wrenching to see what Grace has to go through. I think you've done such a great job on her character. And with Voldemort! Grace is just an accessory to him, he doesn't really need or care about her. He thinks she's too weak and insignificant that he doesn't even bother telling her anything.

It broke my heart to see Grace break. I think you managed to set the mood so perfectly. Really amazing work. I can't wait her to finally find the necessary strength to put her food down and say 'No more'. I can see she has it in her, she just needs to realise what kind of a person her dad really is.

Only thing I'd suggest is maybe a bit longer chapters? At least that's what I prefer more (x

I hope you'll re-request soon (:

Author's Response: thanks for the review! I write a chapter and I think it's so long just because there's so much in it, you know? And then I post it.and It's like...okay I guess that's UNDER a 1000 words?! (what is this?!) I'm trying to lengthen chapters but...it always happens to end just the opposite.

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