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Review:charlottetrips says:
Oh! The plot thickens exponentially! That's so devious. Helena is such the rebel child, not really knowing the boundaries but knowing enough to want to toe the line and blur them a bit.

This whole scene with Godric had me holding my breath as I thought she could slip up at any moment! But knowing the Ravenclaw in her, inshouldve known shed be nimble enough to slip her way around!

The descriptions were amazing. I really like how you're keeping the writing formal and old English sounding. Though I could find it annoying, I like that it lends credibility and substance to the story in general!

xChar

Author's Response: Helene is such a rebel, but I think she had to be in order for the story we know from the books to ring true. It took me a while to work out how she was going to grow into the rebel and why she wanted to betray her mother, but I hope I did it justice here.

Thanks so much for the review :)


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