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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hi! I like Romione and I like it especially when Ron's like a man and not the goofy loveable guy--though I like that too! This is interesting because I thought that you would be having Draco be the father, etc. as that's usually what I see when Hermione is pregnant but it wasn't and I was happy to see that.

Iím loosing my virginity to him, - loosing should be "losing". There were other little spelling errors throughout this.

Your descriptions flowed well and I liked that you took the time to describe the little things like her mom using the pads of her thumbs to wipe away the tears, etc. I especially liked how Harry choked out that line.

A good start!

Author's Response: In this story I really want to portray Ron as the strong friend that I know he is so i'm glad that you like my characterization of him. Honestly I feel if Draco was the father of Hermione's child Ron would really have a much harder time coming to terms with Hermione having a child and would have more outbursts. I hope to get a beta for this soon to help with those small spelling mistakes. I'm glad that you felt my descriptions flowed well! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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