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Review:atellam says:
I have so many feelings.

This is actually ridiculous.

I shouldn't be allowed to read pieces like this.

Seriously. Too many feelings.

I cannot describe my love.

*dying*

I love this. I don't even like Luna that much as a character (I have nothing against her either and maybe if I re-read the books I might feel differently a second time around) but I suddenly have an overwhelming urge to go and read a whole lot of Luna and Rolf fics. I am pathetic and am well aware, but I am so glad you requested this.

Only teeny-tiny thing is:"She told him that she knew he loved her and why and to hell with others trying to define them." I had to re-read that sentence a few times to figure out what you were trying to say. I can't think of another way to word it though, but maybe you can? I think it's just the 'and' on either sides of the 'why' that confuses the reader.

Other than that, this was wonderful. I have no words to describe my feelings. Just...wow.

Author's Response: Oh you make me smile! *hugs*

I too never really thought of Luna bear until I read someone else's story about Luna and Draco (of all people). But then I was struck by this bunny and I had to write it!

Yah, I was already funky about that sentence (and some others) so thanks for putting that there.

Thanks! :)


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