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Review:rupertlover says:
Hey, wassup?
I'm so glad she found out he's a wizard! But I was kinda thinking that she may have had had a bigger freak out, seen as she had just seen magic. SHe seemed to just accept it a bit to easily. But that's just me :)
Also I read your author note on one of my previous review and you asks if I could review again and tell you how to make it a 10/10. Well I'll tell you why I gave you a 9/10 :) Okay, well as it was quite good, it was still quite short and seemed to end a little abruptly. Also I believe it needs more description in when she does something, it seems to switch from like one scene to the next really suddenly and if you add more it may flow more nicely? (I can't really explain it, sorry if that made no sense at all) But other then that, you have a pretty good grasp for story telling :)
Please continue and update soon!
~rupertlover

Author's Response: I was afraid she was a little calm in her reaction...I'll try and fix it next time I edit. And thank you for telling me how to improve :) I can see where there isnt much description, and I know the chapters really need to get longer. Thank you for the wonderful review :) As an author, I am always trying to improve, so advice helps :)
~Lily

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