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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hi there! Over here from the Review Tag!

I do a running review so comment on things as I see them and unfortunately, the first thing I saw was this [Mother’s] in the making - should be [Mothers] as there is no possessive noun.

I can totally see a young mother pouring over naming books (I guess I can see it because it totally does happen) and making a four-foot long list to choose from! You've painted an adorable scene as she just wraps these names around her head while trying to go about her usual tasks.

‘Oi’ I say jokingly swotting him round the head with my hand as he lifted me up off of the sofa. - You switched from past tense to present tense here.

Awww, it's just adorable this little scene between Teddy, Vic and Alicia :) I love how they get the baby's input and how you used her kicking to communicate back! :) Such a cute little story!

Author's Response: Hey thank you for the review!

I'll change the title as soon as I can :) I didn't even realise, force of habit really!

I know the feeling of pouring long and hard over name books and then having a ridiculous amount which you have to sift through because you don't realise how much you're putting down! It was meant to show an adorable little cottage scene with her trying to pick her names so I'm glad you think it showed.

I'm glad you liked the scene with Teddy, Vic and Alicia and the baby's input was really important in that!

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