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Review:charlottetrips says:
Great moment to tackle and you've done it rather well.

you do not [] what it feels like to loose someone you love! - missing [know]?

I was a bit confused with the ending. Helena's already a ghost? Immediately after her death? Or did Rowena's spell do that?

And Lucifer Tate! Is that really his name? I was thinking when I was reading this "Where is the Bloody Baron" and then I realized that he wasn't the "Bloody Baron" until after he killed Helena and died. Also, how'd you come up with Lucifer?

The only thing I could ask of you is to WRITE MORE! With what you wrote here, it did flow and I was drawn into the story, into Helena's rebelliousness and Rowena's anger. I would've wanted to know more about Thomas but from the snippets you wrote, I did get a good idea of the young love Helena was wrapped up in.

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you!
Yeah, I think I'm going to go back through this story with a fine edged comb and edit it (especially the ending) because people are really confused by it :/
Thank you for such an amazing review!!
Jaz


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