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Review:charlottetrips says:
I like that this is about the Scamander twins! They aren't characters I've read much about and I like seeing the different takes authors put on the children of Luna.

It's true I would consider the kids possibly weird just because they're Luna's kids! Thats awful isn't it? But it's something that happens even in our Muggle world, people judge us from where we come from, who our family is, etc.

I don't think Luna and Rolf "hunt" animals so much as study them as magizoologist and naturalist. They wouldn't kill what they're studying, you know what I mean?

You switched tenses here: "Iím not exactly sure who she is but she is gorgeous."

This was a good set up chapter. You've gone into the thick of the story and hopefully you'll use the coming chapters to fill in the twins as well as their friends and this mysterious girl :)

Author's Response: Yeah I figured that the twins would be rather off or more of an interesting type anyways. I tend to switch tenses quite a bit while I'm writing but I'm hoping to have a beta for this soon! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this piece! Thank you so much for reading and reviewnig!

~Slytherinchica08~


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