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Review:drappleontoast says:
great work!
I really enjoyed reading this story. I'm off to read the sequel now. First though I wanted to say, well done as I'm sure this took a lot of effort. If you wouldn't mind giving me some feedback on my story too I would love that as you are a really good writer.
The only issues with your story are tiny grammar things :)
I was wondering though, why would James try to make Lise jeasous by kissing that girl when they had just slept together so obviously she liked him. And also, why did she forgive him so easily?
But i like how you have taken cliche and made it awesome.

Author's Response: Thank you!

I'll try, as you've taken the time and effort to review mine it only seems fair! And thanks, it's lovely to think that you value my opinion!

Yes, believe it or not I'm actually a massive grammar freak, but with a lot of these chapters I was updating so fast I didn't look through them properly. So many apologies, and when I get the time I will edit all the chapters and fix the buggers, they annoy me so much when I read back!

Oh, and many people have wondered this and I always give the same reply: James is an idiot!

He likes Lise so much that he's so worried that she doesn't feel the same way, and therefore he does stupid, cliche things (his ideas are never very good) to try and work Lise out. You'd think, that after years of being Lise's best friend he'd know what she's thinking, but when it comes to him, James has never known.

And she forgave him because she was tired of pushing him away when she loved him so much, and worried that one day he might just give up on her. Honestly, I'd have done the same as Lise, and even though I wrote her stubborn character and all that drama, it was beginning to bore me too!

Thank you very much, for reviewing and for all your lovely words :)

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