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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Well this was a nice second chapter. I think Caitie and Gee are adorable and kind of random, lol. But their friendship is nice.

I am wondering though whether Caitie has had issues with Nott before. Yes, he called her unworthy, but it doesn't seem likely for him to get under skin so quickly with just one bad encounter, so I wonder if she has had other bad encounters with the Slytherin. It would make more sense if she did.

You're story is very well written so far, I really don't think I've seen any mistakes, maybe one, I can't remember, it was probably in the last chapter. Anyway, good job on this so far!

xxEnigmaticEyes16

Author's Response: I think I may have brought a bit of myself in there with the randomness :P

That's a good point you made. I think I might actually include something about bad encounters in the past, I hadn't considered that before. I know it did seem a bit quick, so thanks for that idea :)

Thank you so much! :)


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