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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
Love me a Rosmerta story. Really, I see so little of her around HPFF that I leap at the chance to read something about her. I feel she got a pretty raw deal after being Imperius-ed in the Half Blood Prince, but I genuinely like her character and think she could be a good plot device - she knows everyone in Hogsmeade.

In this, I love your characterisation and description of her. I love how she knows everyone and knows what dark times lie ahead and what's coming etc and she knows it's easier when everyone is together and having a good time! I suggest having a few more thoughts and emotions (maybe she could relate to some of her customers over losing someone?) just to develop her character a little more. I liked her crying because she was lonely, but I think it came a little out of the blue (I thought the main angst in the story came from the Death Eaters) so I would either build that up before and after, or simply take it out.

I love Hagrid in this! You've got his dialogue down to a tee. Well done! And I loved your depictions of all the Marauders! ♥

Overall, I really, really like this one-shot! Congratulations!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for an awesome review! Gald you enjoyed the story. Yeah, the main thing I have to figure out is whether it's her loneliness or the Death Eaters that are the problem...I want to kind of include them both somehow but so they correlate :)

Aw thanks


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