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Review:drappleontoast says:
what an excellent sex scene :P

sorry I just HAD to say that. Really though, the emotions are perfect. I really need to finih the story and read the next one! My one thing to say to you is, maybe get a beta reader to look at it before you publish, just for spelling and grammar.

Author's Response: YAY, thank you! I think you're one of the only people who has said that, considering I worried so much about it!

It's great to think that you liked it, because I didn't think I did it that well, and I love a good sex scene/snog scene, so I was pretty upset with myself. But I feel more confident about it now!

Yes, I need to find someone who has the time, the energy and the want to do it, really. Nobody I actually know writes like I do though, so I'm not sure I'll ever find a beta! But I will be on the lookout!

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