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Review:academica says:
Hey Sam :) Here from Slytherin Review Tag!

I think if I had to choose one slash ship, the most feasible (for me) would be Sirius/Remus and Albus/Scorpius. For some reason, I'm really interested in the idea of Albus and Scorpius being so close, and I had almost forgotten about this story, so I'm very glad that you were above me in the thread!

I really, really love the rain theme here, especially there in the beginning when you switched from Albus loving the rain to Scorpius hating it. It's sweet how they could be brought together by the same thing despite having differing attitudes toward it. I also love the scene with Rose -- it puts a nice spin on the fact that they're usually paired together but appear here as only friends. You've made the cliche new again!

I especially love this line: "Taking a deep breath and hoping for every ounce of courage a Slytherin could have, Scorpius stood up." I know it's simple, but I think it's really telling of the depth and complexity of his character as you wrote him.

The end of this was really poignant. I love the line about how the reality of Scorpius returning was nothing like Albus had dreamed of so many times. I'm glad that Albus and Scorpius found a happy ending after all of the heartache in this piece.

You're a really talented writer, and I should try to spend more time on your (very pretty) author's page in the future! :)

Wonderful job!

Amanda

Author's Response: I love Albus/Scorpius. Their relationship intrigues me. :)

Thank you so much for this review, for the amazing compliments.

Sam.


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