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Review:AC_rules says:
Holy shizzle, I made it to a thank you at the top of your chapter! I didn't even notice that. Awww, LWG you're such a cutie. I'm entirely sure that I don't deserve it, but hey THANKS VERY MUCH.

Ahhh, I liked this chapter a lot. I mean Marlene getting attacked by a Hag is an interesting turn of events, and I'm really intrigued and a little bit bewilded by the whole concept of that... but, you know, I liked it all the same.

Also, I really liked how you didn't have Marlene going through with the whole date thing with Daniel, that was really different and I think possibly more realistic. Also the 'he's in love with me!' and Lily being like 'he fancies you' - I think that's very teenage-girl esque and it made me smile :)

Plus, again I can feel your writing imporve from chapter to chapter and it's really lovely to see. There was the ATTACK OF THE REALLY LONG PARAGRAPH at one point. I feel like you have a one-huge-paragraph-quota, because all of the others are nice normal sizes and then BAM you hit me with this great huge CHUNK of a thing and I'm like WOAH THATS A BIG PARAGRAPH.

I speak, of course, of the paragraph starting 'I woke...' and ending, quite some time later, with... 'into unconciousness'

Anyway, I loved the beginning I love the middle and I rather enjoyed the ending too ;) - your writing is really clear and readable and lovely.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

(sorry for rambling on about the big paragraph for such a long time)

-AC

Author's Response: *blush* Well I thought you and Melissa deserved one as my favourite reviewers :) Uh oh...don't look behind you cos there's a REALLY LONG PARAGRAPH :P You have interesting phobias. But I totally need to edit this chapter in quite a few ways...I wrote it at like 1 in the morning haha.

Thank you! *insert many exclamation marks and heart alt codes here* Hope to see you back soon after your break.

LWG :) x


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